lovely, but it seems like there should be more to this story and I'd like that.
This is still one of the most beautiful realizations and last couple chapters written that I've seen.
Beautiful ... absolutely beautiful
That was so nice. I wish the show had gone in a better direction than they chose...
Author's Response: me too *big sigh* me too.
"You went back for a lot of reasons, but the most important was the missing piece", Joyce gave Buffy advice. A sweet, engaging story of true love.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
That was lovely <happy sigh>.
Author's Response: THank you.
this is a terrific ficlet and could easily have a sequel if you so chose
Author's Response: Too true.
Beautiful.... but not finished surely?
Author's Response: at this point in time - yes...who knows how long that will keep up.
Wow!!! That was Excellent!!!
I loved the dream conection with Joyce, forcing Buffy to open her eyes and see the truth. That was very nice.
Going to Spike the way she did sorta, kinda, seemed a little deceptive. Not that Spike doesn't love her or didn't want it to happen, but there didn't seem to be any love on her part, she just wanted her memory back and her connection to life.
But, in the end, it seemed alright. ??? They merged and gained full knowledge of each other, a life-force, a heartbeat and a soul. Buffy found her heaven again, and Spike found his heaven in Buffy.
Author's Response: I agree, there was deception on Buffy's part, but at that point in time she wasn't thinking about anyone else, just her own need to fill the empty space. But by making the connection she bacame complete. A selfish means to an end sure, but then her selfishness mirrors his selflessness.
I liked the story but the ending was a little bland. Your eplanations of souls made it seem like you were forshadowing a more eplainatory event and also there was nothing to show how the sobbies react which was stated as on of Buffy's doubts. Are you planning on a sequeal, or continuationof the story. Or are you just leaving it the way it is?
Author's Response: I guesss you'll just have to wait and see.
I loved it. Then again I always love what you write.
Author's Response: you are too kind.
Beautiful ... absolutely beautiful. Heart warming ... Excellent.
Author's Response: thank you.
AWWW! So sweet. I want more!! This is a great ending, and also a huge cliffhanger. If you see your way clear to writing more on this story, I certainly wouldn't complain. Keep up the good work on all your stories though.
Author's Response: I agree, but at this time I need to concentrate on my other stories...maybe when...?
awesome! I excited the you posted this it was great! Is there more? Hehehe
Author's Response: No at this point - sorry.
Very sweet. Buffy definitely needed healing.
Author's Response: she did at that!
Wow, that was great. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
I loved this story and it broke my heart that it was only one chapter *sob* and the possiblilities for more of this are endless...the reactions, angel's especially...love angel bashing! PLease, want more, make it longer....Puhlease!
I always love seeing Joyce-she is such a universal mother and Buffy seems to listen to her as seen in this story. Too bad they didn't follow this thread in the show. Would definitely have worked! Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks Kim, at this point it is just a one shot, but I may add to it later.
OOPS! I didn't realize that it was only a one chapter story... Well,,,, if thats all you planned OK but it was so wonderful and you could do so much with it.... But if you only wanted it ONE chapter I will have to deal... OK but it was BRILLIANT!!!!
Author's Response: just the one chap at the moment. Maybe more later on.
OH WOW OH WOW OH WOW!!!!!!!
Talk about kick starting a story! WOW I am DYING for another chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry, it's a one shot at the moment.
Love this story! Can't wait for an update. I love that her mom was the one to tell her all of this and open her eyes to a few things.
Author's Response: You might have a while to wait :)
Oh Jack i loved this...you know there are alot of possibilities for this story..maybe one day you will do a sequel..great story...n
Author's Response: maybe :)